I actually like how this one turned out. It's really really cute.

CRITS

Miroku

Eyes
The only problem I can see with Miroku are his eyes. They seem a bit too narrow when he's looking up. Awesome job!!!

Kagome

Face
Nothing wrong with the face except for size. My gosh it's so so cute!!! ^//^ You also got the hands in great proportion to the rest of her! Awesome job!

Arms
This bit is where the problem is. Link #2 gives a great example of the sleeves. Instead of trying to make them look baggy, but still close to her arms, just let them slide. Make them baggy, but don't worry as much on shape. Her sleeves are very baggy, so they should make a huge puff kind of look when they reach the cuffs of the shirt. I really like how you already noticed these.

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Gorgeous job. =3

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Professor Professor: Okay let’s get outs there and give it to them with everythings we got left! While we still got some of what we've got left to give it to them with!
Changed Daily: That's the ticket!

I remeber that episode where kagome got sick and Miroku carried her home, I wish I was kagome because if I got sick I would love it if Miroku would carry me home!

Wonderful job! Kagome seems to be enjoying herself lol